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Over the past few weeks, Mrs. Clayton and us were working on our persuasive writing pieces. We worked so hard and finally got it done. In this essay, I will be persuading you to lower your volume during bus rides.

 Some things that I think I did well is using repetition. I think that because I used it throughout the essay. In one of my paragraphs, I used repetition only. Another thing I think I did well is adding lots of mini stories.

 Things to work on can be to use more transition words. I only spotted some transition words in the beginning of paragraphs. I also might want to work on including facts to my essays.

I hope you all enjoy my essay!

The United Class Of Mrs. Clayton

Hello! This is my second narrative piece. The only difference in this piece and the first piece is that this piece is a different story and we did this independently. This time Flip Snack wasn't being a stinker, so this piece was published really quickly. We got a shorter time to write this piece, from draft to now. I had a lot of fun drafting this piece. If you are wondering, this piece has 828 words. I counted every single word in this story. I'm just kidding, I used word count.

If you haven't read the first story the click here. The only thing I can say now is enjoy and fell free to comment!!!

  

The Ride Is In Me

This piece took around 2 months to make. The writing got better each day, step by step. Transferring the piece to a website that makes the piece into a book (http://www.flipsnack.com/) was the stinker. After lots of stress transferring the piece, this is the final product.

Well, I hope you enjoy the story and feel free to comment on what you like.

Second Story: Click Here

 

What Book Do You Like?

                Middle School is jail to Tommy, but Dwight and Origami Yoda saves the day. I have read 3 book from this series, Book 1: The Strange Case Of Origami Yoda. Book 2: Darth Paper Strikes Back. Book 3: The Secrets Of The Fortune Wookie. These are Star Wars characters, but its nothing like the movie(s).  There is a lot of twist in the book. Each book has a twist at the end that makes you want to read the next book. This book is mainly about surviving middle school.You are going to enjoy this series!

Book 1                                                    Book 2                                                     Book 3