Hello! This is my second narrative piece. The only difference in this piece and the first piece is that this piece is a different story and we did this independently. This time Flip Snack wasn't being a stinker, so this piece was published really quickly. We got a shorter time to write this piece, from draft to now. I had a lot of fun drafting this piece. If you are wondering, this piece has 828 words. I counted every single word in this story. I'm just kidding, I used word count.
If you haven't read the first story the click here. The only thing I can say now is enjoy and fell free to comment!!!
You could've made your message more clear. Other then that great story.
ReplyDeleteYes I agree with you the message wasn't that clear. I love your detail too. I am also happy you were able to be in Mrs. Clayton's class. I think we both like the class.
DeleteI also agree I couldn't find the message but you did really great job describing how you feel
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