Life is good for teenager Scott Cruz. He has many friends, does well in school, and lives a happy life. Can life get any better? Well sadly, things changed in a heartbeat for Scott. On the way to his 8th grade graduation, at age fourteen, Scott’s world was turned upside down. While driving on a busy intersection, his taxi driver wasn’t paying attention to the incoming traffic and crashed head on into another car, hard, causing Scott to fracture his skull. Upon waking up and finding himself in the hospital, he gets the bad news: his skull fracture caused him permanent deafness in both ears. Dealing with his sudden disability was hard, but thankfully he had his older brother to go to for help. But what happens if he relies on his brother too much? Well, he’s about to find out.
1.) Your story sounds really interesting
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I like how you explain the conflict really well and tell a smooth story. But I thought the problem was that he was deaf and given up? Why is relying on his brother too much now the problem?
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