The United Class Of Mrs. Clayton

Hello! This is my second narrative piece. The only difference in this piece and the first piece is that this piece is a different story and we did this independently. This time Flip Snack wasn't being a stinker, so this piece was published really quickly. We got a shorter time to write this piece, from draft to now. I had a lot of fun drafting this piece. If you are wondering, this piece has 828 words. I counted every single word in this story. I'm just kidding, I used word count.

If you haven't read the first story the click here. The only thing I can say now is enjoy and fell free to comment!!!

  

The Ride Is In Me

This piece took around 2 months to make. The writing got better each day, step by step. Transferring the piece to a website that makes the piece into a book (http://www.flipsnack.com/) was the stinker. After lots of stress transferring the piece, this is the final product.

Well, I hope you enjoy the story and feel free to comment on what you like.

Second Story: Click Here

 

Our Wish Is Granted

Our Challenge

I deserve a day off from school because you could do much more exciting things than just doing test and learn. If you get a day off you can... sleep more, eat more, play more. There's just nothing better than a day off. 

One reason I think I deserve a day off is so I can play video games. Some games like Minecraft, can get you more creative and build things that will never be in the real world. Creativeness helps you in classes like art. If you need to make an art project, creativeness will help you finish. You ask me why, we'll some people can't think of what design or pattern they want. So you can learn and play at the same time. Your teacher will be happy!

Minecraft Rocks!

Another reason is that we can go outdoors and do outdoor activities. That is better than staying indoors for 1/3 of a day. You can get fresh air and exercise. So you can stay fit and not become fat by eating junk foods.

I hope that this convinced you to give me a day off.

My Boy

My child is named Johan, he is in 5th grade and

What's Happening?!!

studies at SAS. He likes to be indoor and outdoor. Johan likes to be indoor because he loves playing Minecraft and other games like that. He also likes to play the violin. When it comes to being outdoor, he loves swimming, walking, and just playing tag! 

Ice Cream Genres

This video is about a goal we all want to achieve called Ice Cream Genres. Watch this video and see how Ice Cream Genre works and what we will do for the next 2 months.

Crunches In P.E.

Strengths
I feel that...

• I didn't go very high, but enough to touch my knees
• Didn't move my legs much

Areas Of Improvement

I feel that I should...

• Touch the floor with my hands before doing the next crunch

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