Writing Goals: Myth Reflection

Writing Goal: I have to use more details and slow the story down so that the readers can picture it in their minds.

I'm halfway there. I have used more details in my writing but haven't really slowed the story down before the climax. One example of me using details in my writing is when I described the boat Ahaanious (main character) used to get to Pluton Island (headquarters of the antagonist). When I got near the climax, I haven't slowed down the story. I haven't captured every single thing the characters do right before the climax. So my next step is to slow the story down during important moments so the readers can picture it.